Monday, May 9, 2011

Sweet spring

Spring is come
my eyes are dry
though still possessed by thee..

So if spring is here
but you are gone
its all the same to me....

copyright*budhaaah*
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8 comments:

  1. A lovely tribute to a lost one...

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  2. The rhymes are subtle but the music lingers and the song seems sunny but is actually a lament. Very artful to achieve that in six lines. Well done! Gay

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  3. laugh my nervous laugh
    for though you are gone, I see
    apathy giraffe

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  4. Good one, very enjoyable !
    JL&B

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  5. love spring, and the sentiment...you take us quickly through a range of emotions....

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  6. This spring I had the same feeling..

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