I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
A lovely tribute to a lost one...
The rhymes are subtle but the music lingers and the song seems sunny but is actually a lament. Very artful to achieve that in six lines. Well done! Gay
lovely thank you x
laugh my nervous laughfor though you are gone, I seeapathy giraffe
Clever! I like it.
Good one, very enjoyable !JL&B
love spring, and the sentiment...you take us quickly through a range of emotions....
This spring I had the same feeling..