Monday, May 9, 2011

Sweet spring

Spring is come
my eyes are dry
though still possessed by thee..

So if spring is here
but you are gone
its all the same to me....

copyright*budhaaah*
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8 comments:

  1. Kodjo DeynooMay 9, 2011 at 7:54 AM

    A lovely tribute to a lost one...

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  2. BeachannyMay 9, 2011 at 8:23 AM

    The rhymes are subtle but the music lingers and the song seems sunny but is actually a lament. Very artful to achieve that in six lines. Well done! Gay

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  3. UnknownMay 9, 2011 at 8:28 AM

    lovely thank you x

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  4. UnknownMay 9, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    laugh my nervous laugh
    for though you are gone, I see
    apathy giraffe

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  5. ValerieMay 9, 2011 at 11:33 AM

    Clever! I like it.

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  6. JL DodgeMay 9, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    Good one, very enjoyable !
    JL&B

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  7. Brian MillerMay 9, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    love spring, and the sentiment...you take us quickly through a range of emotions....

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  8. SHUBHAJITMay 9, 2011 at 10:59 PM

    This spring I had the same feeling..

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