Tuesday, January 18, 2011

dead years..

I have just seven / you have but none,
you say 'this journey has just begun,
hold on to my hand,keep looking ahead'
but - sweet - inside I am already dead..

copyright*budhaaah*
For One shot poetry at
http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/2011/01/one-shot-wednesday-poetry-week-29.html

16 comments:

  1. haunting...to be dead and still breathing...

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  2. I'm rolling this around in my head. I like it. It makes me want to think on it some more.

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  3. Rise now. The days of sleeping are ending. Live again.

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  4. The walking dead...the sort of people who I always feel the sorriest for.

    This packed a lot of emotion, budh.aaah

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  5. Wow. I read this as pure frustration... I can relate.

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  6. Minimalist and poignant. Beautiful. Your words connected with me today.

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  7. Gripping and really dark (and creepy)!
    Dead, and yet alive... (got the shivers)
    But it made for some serious thinking! Poignant as ever, Budhaaah!

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  8. Wow..awesome..very powerful work... :)

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  9. HI Budhaaah

    Great one shot.. perfect... ending.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay

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  10. Relatable, ina differentiated way. Efffective.

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  11. Let me think.. could I make that any more clear...
    Nope. ..smile..

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