Flip away for I wont keel
Slowly first let me heal
Love is – yet - like a crack in my heel
copyright*budhaaah*
Thursday, January 20, 2011
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I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/ and yet I float/ In debt and yet/ - I hope..
Nice...love the words...
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I read your poem and then reread it - and took away more than I expected. Thanks.
ReplyDeleteI don't know that I've ever heard love compared to a crack in the heel before.
ReplyDeleteAnd now that I've read it, I shall never forget it. Too perfect.
Wonderful verse!!
Great rhymes:-)
ReplyDeleteYes I am flip in in a Thursday, flip in mad
ReplyDeleteNever flip for anything you do not believe in. You got that right kiddo.
ReplyDeletewhich hurts a great deal...
ReplyDeletesmiles.
a crack in the heel... painful, right?
ReplyDeleteAlways good to heel - I agree with this wholeheartedly as we are sometimes all too quick to fall in love again.
ReplyDeleteMore than happy for you to use the memorable moment on todays post, it is beautiful.
this made me smile.
ReplyDeleteDo not kneel for love
Time - wounds all heels!
ReplyDeleteLoved it!
John
Gold Bond cream works great! ;_)
OUCH!!! That really hurt, B!!! Some Kerasol might help (I think)
ReplyDeleteHa ha ha..Walking Man comment is a kick Ass comment. Everything lies in one single line.
ReplyDeleteWhen we believe, we find strength, when we find strength all our diseases automatically heal. Do you feel strong? It is indeed the medicine of all disease..