Tuesday, January 18, 2011

dead years..

I have just seven / you have but none,
you say 'this journey has just begun,
hold on to my hand,keep looking ahead'
but - sweet - inside I am already dead..

copyright*budhaaah*
For One shot poetry at
http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/2011/01/one-shot-wednesday-poetry-week-29.html
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16 comments:

  1. डॉ. नूतन डिमरी गैरोला- नीतिJanuary 18, 2011 at 7:20 PM

    OMG..short but very powerful creation..

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  2. masterymisteryJanuary 18, 2011 at 7:44 PM

    made me think, thank u.


    masterymistery at cosmic rapture

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  3. Brian MillerJanuary 18, 2011 at 8:07 PM

    haunting...to be dead and still breathing...

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  4. Major MackJanuary 18, 2011 at 8:21 PM

    good lord. thats perfect ;)

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  5. SarahJanuary 18, 2011 at 10:15 PM

    I'm rolling this around in my head. I like it. It makes me want to think on it some more.

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  6. ValerieJanuary 19, 2011 at 1:23 AM

    Powerful, and good.

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  7. the walking manJanuary 19, 2011 at 3:35 AM

    Rise now. The days of sleeping are ending. Live again.

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  8. TALONJanuary 19, 2011 at 7:56 AM

    The walking dead...the sort of people who I always feel the sorriest for.

    This packed a lot of emotion, budh.aaah

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  9. DebJanuary 19, 2011 at 8:13 AM

    Wow. I read this as pure frustration... I can relate.

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  10. earthgirlJanuary 19, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    Minimalist and poignant. Beautiful. Your words connected with me today.

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  11. KavitaJanuary 20, 2011 at 1:45 AM

    Gripping and really dark (and creepy)!
    Dead, and yet alive... (got the shivers)
    But it made for some serious thinking! Poignant as ever, Budhaaah!

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  12. Felicity Grace TerryJanuary 20, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    So tragic, so powerful.

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  13. eyeographyJanuary 20, 2011 at 12:20 PM

    Wow..awesome..very powerful work... :)

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  14. Shashidhar SharmaJanuary 21, 2011 at 9:39 PM

    HI Budhaaah

    Great one shot.. perfect... ending.

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay

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  15. Steve IsaakJanuary 22, 2011 at 12:52 AM

    Relatable, ina differentiated way. Efffective.

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  16. AnonymousJanuary 22, 2011 at 5:39 PM

    Let me think.. could I make that any more clear...
    Nope. ..smile..

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