I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
intense words...so sad...the violation and death...
Powerful arrangement in so few words. I think the pattern adds to the effect.
I agree, short but powerful, often less is more!
Gosh, that's clever. Well done.
let the fucking void be the dead thing, step across it to he land where there is some fresh air.
This is really good!
how paradoxical isnt it, how emptiness can fill...
I like it very much... the words, and what they don't spell out as well. Clever!
so powerful and clear!
powerful and sad!
and in the void shall darkness rise
Fill it fill it fill it I say! Powerful words.
a vacuum dreams of nothing more than to be filled