I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/ and yet I float/ In debt and yet/ - I hope..
that is really wonderful, Budaah. Very well written indeed. Wishing you a happy Easter monday of sorts. :)
hey thanks Mmm. And right back atcha :)
filed away and forgotten..the heat is synthetic - sounds like she longs for that last sleep..
a terrible feeling to be forgotten...may she sleep and dream o f places well beyond....
Claudia, In her Sitch who wouldnt long for that last sleep.Brian, I know that feeling only too well and oh how that must feel tat that age. I can only shudder instaed of even trying to imagine.
Sad, but so many times true, and beautifully captured in your lovely poem.
think you captured the tone of the photo quite well in your poem. i like it.
A perfect picture to illustrate this sad, sad poem.
I really like those first lines. So sad.
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Corrode the memory and you lose the good and the bad. Corrosion eats indiscriminately.
Solid, enjoyable work.
sad...i really felt the first three lines really. lovely.
that is really wonderful, Budaah. Very well written indeed.
ReplyDeleteWishing you a happy Easter monday of sorts. :)
hey thanks Mmm. And right back atcha :)
ReplyDeletefiled away and forgotten..the heat is synthetic - sounds like she longs for that last sleep..
ReplyDeletea terrible feeling to be forgotten...may she sleep and dream o f places well beyond....
ReplyDeleteClaudia, In her Sitch who wouldnt long for that last sleep.
ReplyDeleteBrian, I know that feeling only too well and oh how that must feel tat that age. I can only shudder instaed of even trying to imagine.
Sad, but so many times true, and beautifully captured in your lovely poem.
ReplyDeletethink you captured the tone of the photo quite well in your poem. i like it.
ReplyDeleteA perfect picture to illustrate this sad, sad poem.
ReplyDeleteI really like those first lines. So sad.
ReplyDeleteLove the poem. I really had my eyes moist. Lovely blog. Please do visit my blog and leave your footprints behind by posting comments:-
ReplyDeletehttp://parentingworkshop.blogspot.com/
http://fun-with-mails.blogspot.com/
Corrode the memory and you lose the good and the bad. Corrosion eats indiscriminately.
ReplyDeleteSolid, enjoyable work.
ReplyDeletesad...i really felt the first three lines really. lovely.
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