Friday, April 29, 2011

The 55 sleeps

I inhale
deep..your scent divine

Rouse me out of my slumber deep
- aye - I have slept
far too long..

Pull me closer,
ever the malleable sigh
to your inhalation divine..

suck me in,
opening my eyes
to your sweet cries..

Been way too long,
now its time to wake up
to your sweet sight....

copyright*budhaaah*
'Sleep' for Brian's theme thursday
Tell a story in 55 words for G-man
and Imperfect prose

16 comments:

  1. {;-]} There ya go. Now that is a good place to be.

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  2. smiles. sound like just the place to wake to a dream...

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  3. Nice to wake up that way! This morning I woke up to city noise and a bad dream :-(

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  4. Everything you write is beautiful, so I won't say it.
    :)

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  5. sweet awakening

    funny that mine is the opposite type of meed upon awakening


    thanks for sharing


    that is all

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  6. I meant *mood* not meed.

    I hate typos


    that is all

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  7. A great way to wake up! Very sensual.

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  8. Dang Budhaaah...
    That was a beautiful piece written for someone that should feel very loved.
    Most excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  9. I love the closeness that this poem invokes.

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  11. Way to include G-Mans 55 with the Sleep Prompt.

    Nice work.

    Lisa
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