Friday, April 29, 2011

The 55 sleeps

I inhale
deep..your scent divine

Rouse me out of my slumber deep
- aye - I have slept
far too long..

Pull me closer,
ever the malleable sigh
to your inhalation divine..

suck me in,
opening my eyes
to your sweet cries..

Been way too long,
now its time to wake up
to your sweet sight....

copyright*budhaaah*
'Sleep' for Brian's theme thursday
Tell a story in 55 words for G-man
and Imperfect prose
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16 comments:

  1. the walking manApril 29, 2011 at 2:29 AM

    {;-]} There ya go. Now that is a good place to be.

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  2. Brian MillerApril 29, 2011 at 3:16 AM

    smiles. sound like just the place to wake to a dream...

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  3. MerylApril 29, 2011 at 5:15 AM

    Nice to wake up that way! This morning I woke up to city noise and a bad dream :-(

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  4. ayalaApril 29, 2011 at 6:08 AM

    A nice way to wake up :)

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  5. DebApril 29, 2011 at 7:44 AM

    Everything you write is beautiful, so I won't say it.
    :)

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  6. AnonymousApril 29, 2011 at 7:57 AM

    Sweet, passionate, great.

    - Alice

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  7. PBJdreamerApril 29, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    sweet awakening

    funny that mine is the opposite type of meed upon awakening


    thanks for sharing


    that is all

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  8. PBJdreamerApril 29, 2011 at 10:08 AM

    I meant *mood* not meed.

    I hate typos


    that is all

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  9. BelindaApril 29, 2011 at 3:47 PM

    A great way to wake up! Very sensual.

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  10. Steve IsaakApril 29, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    Sweet, romantic work.

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  11. G-ManApril 29, 2011 at 5:40 PM

    Dang Budhaaah...
    That was a beautiful piece written for someone that should feel very loved.
    Most excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  12. Shanae BranhamApril 29, 2011 at 9:26 PM

    I love the closeness that this poem invokes.

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  13. Maude LynnApril 30, 2011 at 5:42 AM

    Absolutely lovely!

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  15. LisaMay 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM

    Way to include G-Mans 55 with the Sleep Prompt.

    Nice work.

    Lisa
    InspiredbyLisa

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  16. AnonymousMay 1, 2011 at 4:59 PM

    nicely done!!

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