Friday, April 22, 2011

Friday poetically...

Ride a teardrop
Carried from the blue pool
Delicious love whispers
His hello to the moon..

Sound of sour pool
Carried a friend
in the magic boat
to a love cold too soon

They said they try only try
Sweet dance in the old school
I danced, drank my sweet
Sour love in teardrop pool

Tonight love dream of
Green beans yellow balloons
Whisper our love dreams
To sweet sweet moon….


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first attempt arrrghh..for friday poetically
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7 comments:

  1. Major MackApril 22, 2011 at 1:22 PM

    that was nice

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  2. Brian MillerApril 22, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    ha you did well...it was my challenge and i am struggling...smiles...i like ride a teardrop...and whisper our love dreams....

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  3. MarianApril 22, 2011 at 4:26 PM

    adorable. fun challenge!

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  4. A Plain ObserverApril 22, 2011 at 8:08 PM

    love whispers are delicious...is love always sweet and sour?

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  5. the walking manApril 23, 2011 at 5:31 AM

    Better than Floyd Old Man Music

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  6. ValerieApril 23, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    Very good. I like love whispers.

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  7. DebApril 23, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    I love JBT's comment. Yes, love is sweet and sour and sometimes, bittersweet.

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