Tuesday, March 8, 2011

so close...

loosely scattered yet held close
different petals of one same rose
are your thoughts - sweet - quivering through my soul...

copyright*budhaaah*
for 'one shot wednesday'

10 comments:

  1. smiles....like minds brought together...

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  2. loosely scattered yet held close
    different words of one same poem
    is the magic of ur thoughts..creating lovely poems...
    thanks for sharning beautiful lines..

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  3. I am now, but never wanted be, yet in your hand a petal of a rose.

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  4. What can I say? I'm a sucker for flowers. :)

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  5. Love this. I love when a poet can say so much in just a few words.

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  6. Lovely, I took a two or three reading to fully appreciate the different meanings.

    thanks for sharing :)

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  7. very nice...we are all petals on the same rose

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  8. Very well done poem that reads like a great compliment to whomever it addresses. Nice work, budhaaah

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  9. beautiful..and oh so tender...
    Love, quivering like those rose petals.. really perfectly described!

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