I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/ and yet I float/ In debt and yet/ - I hope..
smiles....like minds brought together...
loosely scattered yet held close different words of one same poemis the magic of ur thoughts..creating lovely poems... thanks for sharning beautiful lines..
superb imagery.
I am now, but never wanted be, yet in your hand a petal of a rose.
What can I say? I'm a sucker for flowers. :)
Love this. I love when a poet can say so much in just a few words.
Lovely, I took a two or three reading to fully appreciate the different meanings. thanks for sharing :)
very nice...we are all petals on the same rose
Very well done poem that reads like a great compliment to whomever it addresses. Nice work, budhaaah
beautiful..and oh so tender... Love, quivering like those rose petals.. really perfectly described!
smiles....like minds brought together...
ReplyDeleteloosely scattered yet held close
ReplyDeletedifferent words of one same poem
is the magic of ur thoughts..creating lovely poems...
thanks for sharning beautiful lines..
superb imagery.
ReplyDeleteI am now, but never wanted be, yet in your hand a petal of a rose.
ReplyDeleteWhat can I say? I'm a sucker for flowers. :)
ReplyDeleteLove this. I love when a poet can say so much in just a few words.
ReplyDeleteLovely, I took a two or three reading to fully appreciate the different meanings.
ReplyDeletethanks for sharing :)
very nice...we are all petals on the same rose
ReplyDeleteVery well done poem that reads like a great compliment to whomever it addresses. Nice work, budhaaah
ReplyDeletebeautiful..and oh so tender...
ReplyDeleteLove, quivering like those rose petals.. really perfectly described!