I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
smiles....like minds brought together...
loosely scattered yet held close different words of one same poemis the magic of ur thoughts..creating lovely poems... thanks for sharning beautiful lines..
I am now, but never wanted be, yet in your hand a petal of a rose.
What can I say? I'm a sucker for flowers. :)
Love this. I love when a poet can say so much in just a few words.
Lovely, I took a two or three reading to fully appreciate the different meanings. thanks for sharing :)
very nice...we are all petals on the same rose
Very well done poem that reads like a great compliment to whomever it addresses. Nice work, budhaaah
beautiful..and oh so tender... Love, quivering like those rose petals.. really perfectly described!