Friday, March 18, 2011

friday poetically..

Oh fair Gertrude
I am so lost for I have been a fool
Am immersed forever now
In your love
Let not shackled destiny intrude
Gertrude…


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8 comments:

  1. smiles...i do believe he may be shackled for all eternity....

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  2. 'Am immersed forever now
    In your love'

    Very good. I loved that line; so similar to the words used by hubs when we got married.

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  3. Owww..it's been a while since I heard the name Gertrude, but you painted her pretty with this little ditty

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  4. Ah Gertrude what a sweet lady - a maiden fair....blessings...bkm

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  5. Great job ! cute little ditty in my head now LOL

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  6. Greetings:

    Week 27 Poetry Potluck is open, welcome/Thanks (4) joining us…share your poetry with us today…

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    Happy Monday,
    Bless you!
    xxx

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  7. stunning piece.
    keep it up.

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  8. Aaah. I wonder how many of us have been fools for love at some point or other.

    Best wishes and thanks for another wonderful offering. x

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