I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
smiles...i do believe he may be shackled for all eternity....
'Am immersed forever now In your love'Very good. I loved that line; so similar to the words used by hubs when we got married.
Owww..it's been a while since I heard the name Gertrude, but you painted her pretty with this little ditty
Ah Gertrude what a sweet lady - a maiden fair....blessings...bkm
Great job ! cute little ditty in my head now LOL
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stunning piece.keep it up.
Aaah. I wonder how many of us have been fools for love at some point or other.Best wishes and thanks for another wonderful offering. x