I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
Things aren't as they seem sometimes. Lovely piece!
Very well put..:)
powerful imagery,apt piece..enjoyed the simplicity in it.
YEAH!, you win The Celebrate Poet of 2010 AwardHappy Sunday!Come to our potluck tonight,Theme: Journey and the road ahead.