I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
I have to say you are a gifted writer. Not everyone is blessed with that talent. I enjoy your work.
me, destiny,very lovely sentiments, beautiful delivery.hurray, thanks for sharing...Happy Rally.let me know after done 18 commenting.
Profound and beautiful.Anita.
so simple so nice!
Well said in few words. Happy New Year.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/darkness-is-only-a-degree-of-light/
Very well done, a great deal of power in a small package of words. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece with us!
ouch and a wow...what a piece...perfect one...
Oh yes, very nice. Happy New Year.
wounds heal then they scar and scarred skin is the most malleable toughest portion on the body. Same with the heart.
such talent in your words...wonderful
Couldn't visit frequently to your beautiful blog for quite sometimes as am suffering from chickengunia since long. Anyway,As we move towards a brand NEW START in 2011.Wishing you & your family a very Happy & Prosperous New Year.May the year ahead be filled Good Health, Happiness and Peace !!!
like satin stripes it lingers to my soul..BEAUTIFUL! :)
lovely short piece, made me nostalgic... still can't figure out why.I like it much!
A great write with an edge that cuts through to the quick!
Beautiful write..Very touching...Happy New Year... :)
lovely end ...your luscious songs of hope - for my wounded destinyWonderful poem :)
awesome poem!!!Really enjoyed myself
and you are going to keep listening
the lover, the beggar? what do you want from this person? lick your wounds and move on, i say.harsh and cruel, but it's good to get out of ruts whenever possible.
beautiful piece, very elegant simplicity, a precious gem, very well crafted. thanks for sharing!
an angel he sent! tq buddhaah for your comment on my wednesday review! mine for this thursday- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/
Fabulous. Simple. Poignant. True