Thursday, December 30, 2010

have come this far..

I have come this far - and then no more
since - my heart - you sang to me
your luscious songs of hope - for my wounded destiny..

copyright*budhaaah*
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22 comments:

  1. miss_meDecember 30, 2010 at 10:41 AM

    I have to say you are a gifted writer. Not everyone is blessed with that talent. I enjoy your work.

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  2. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 30, 2010 at 11:19 AM

    me, destiny,

    very lovely sentiments, beautiful delivery.
    hurray, thanks for sharing...

    Happy Rally.
    let me know after done 18 commenting.

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  3. Anita MagdalenaDecember 30, 2010 at 12:21 PM

    Profound and beautiful.

    Anita.

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  4. SamDecember 30, 2010 at 3:13 PM

    so simple so nice!

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  5. AnonymousDecember 30, 2010 at 7:13 PM

    Well said in few words. Happy New Year.
    Victoria

    http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/12/30/darkness-is-only-a-degree-of-light/

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  6. LeiffyVDecember 30, 2010 at 8:14 PM

    Very well done, a great deal of power in a small package of words. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece with us!

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  7. TweetyDecember 31, 2010 at 1:57 AM

    ouch and a wow...what a piece...perfect one...

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  8. ValerieDecember 31, 2010 at 3:46 AM

    Oh yes, very nice. Happy New Year.

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  9. the walking manDecember 31, 2010 at 6:02 AM

    wounds heal then they scar and scarred skin is the most malleable toughest portion on the body. Same with the heart.

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  10. AnonymousDecember 31, 2010 at 6:59 AM

    such talent in your words...wonderful

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  11. पी.सी.गोदियाल "परचेत"December 31, 2010 at 7:46 AM

    Couldn't visit frequently to your beautiful blog for quite sometimes as am suffering from chickengunia since long. Anyway,As we move towards a brand NEW START in 2011.

    Wishing you & your family a very Happy & Prosperous New Year.
    May the year ahead be filled Good Health, Happiness and Peace !!!

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  12. Desert RoseDecember 31, 2010 at 11:51 AM

    like satin stripes it lingers to my soul..BEAUTIFUL! :)

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  13. gracefulgliderDecember 31, 2010 at 12:09 PM

    lovely short piece, made me nostalgic... still can't figure out why.
    I like it much!

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  14. AnonymousDecember 31, 2010 at 12:25 PM

    A great write with an edge that cuts through to the quick!

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  15. eyeographyDecember 31, 2010 at 9:59 PM

    Beautiful write..
    Very touching...

    Happy New Year... :)

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  16. Uma AnandaneJanuary 1, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    lovely end ...your luscious songs of hope - for my wounded destiny
    Wonderful poem :)

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  17. gracefulgliderJanuary 2, 2011 at 11:07 AM

    awesome poem!!!

    Really enjoyed myself

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  18. A Plain ObserverJanuary 2, 2011 at 5:55 PM

    and you are going to keep listening

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  19. AnonymousJanuary 3, 2011 at 7:27 PM

    the lover, the beggar? what do you want from this person? lick your wounds and move on, i say.

    harsh and cruel, but it's good to get out of ruts whenever possible.

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  20. AnonymousJanuary 5, 2011 at 4:11 AM

    beautiful piece, very elegant simplicity, a precious gem, very well crafted. thanks for sharing!

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  21. AnonymousJanuary 6, 2011 at 1:18 AM

    an angel he sent! tq buddhaah for your comment on my wednesday review! mine for this thursday- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/

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  22. UnknownJanuary 6, 2011 at 6:45 AM

    Fabulous. Simple. Poignant. True

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