Tuesday, November 23, 2010

One shot

Even as I burn in hell
In sweet turmoil
- becoming whole again -
is the only way
to sum this void

My shot for 'one shot wednesday' a great platform for poets
http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/
copyright*budhaaah*

12 comments:

  1. And that's a sign of enlightenment indeed!! Well written, Budhaaah..
    Recognizing one's own true self, and honing it to get out of the dungeons -- that speaks for itself!!

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  2. I remember something (I don't know whether it's appropriate to the context or not)..

    If love hurts, then love some more, if love hurts some more, then love even more, if love hurts even more... then love till it hurts no more

    I quote here from a movie..
    "when we forgive, we love, and when we love God's light shine upon us."

    Then only we can sum up the void..a silence and infinite calmness..

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  3. Fire makes steel stronger when it is tempered in oils.

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  4. ..the only way to sum this void...interesting and thought provoking poem you brought to the table..

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  5. claudia is spot on...the end was a great end...thanks for linking with osw...pete

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  6. doing something you consider sinful to calm to void? go for it!

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  7. nicely done! Tis indeed what life is meant to be about, Hell and enjoying the journey there

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  8. Thank you all so much for the warm words and visiting. I appreciate this :)

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  9. Becoming whole again... interesting verse.. and so powerful... to bring out the loneliness of void... Good one shot... Thanks

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  10. Relatable, to the point, smart-minded.

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