Tuesday, November 23, 2010

One shot

Even as I burn in hell
In sweet turmoil
- becoming whole again -
is the only way
to sum this void

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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 24, 2010 at 1:44 AM

    And that's a sign of enlightenment indeed!! Well written, Budhaaah..
    Recognizing one's own true self, and honing it to get out of the dungeons -- that speaks for itself!!

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  2. SHUBHAJITNovember 24, 2010 at 4:19 AM

    I remember something (I don't know whether it's appropriate to the context or not)..

    If love hurts, then love some more, if love hurts some more, then love even more, if love hurts even more... then love till it hurts no more

    I quote here from a movie..
    "when we forgive, we love, and when we love God's light shine upon us."

    Then only we can sum up the void..a silence and infinite calmness..

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  3. the walking manNovember 24, 2010 at 4:30 AM

    Fire makes steel stronger when it is tempered in oils.

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  4. gautami tripathyNovember 24, 2010 at 7:49 AM

    Very very good!

    shifting with the winds

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  5. ClaudiaNovember 24, 2010 at 10:42 AM

    ..the only way to sum this void...interesting and thought provoking poem you brought to the table..

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  6. One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and ArtistsNovember 24, 2010 at 2:47 PM

    claudia is spot on...the end was a great end...thanks for linking with osw...pete

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  7. A Plain ObserverNovember 24, 2010 at 5:08 PM

    doing something you consider sinful to calm to void? go for it!

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  8. AnonymousNovember 24, 2010 at 5:14 PM

    nicely done! Tis indeed what life is meant to be about, Hell and enjoying the journey there

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  9. Helena MalheurNovember 24, 2010 at 5:56 PM

    How very concise - powerful words!

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  10. budh.aaahNovember 24, 2010 at 7:34 PM

    Thank you all so much for the warm words and visiting. I appreciate this :)

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  11. Shashidhar SharmaNovember 27, 2010 at 3:51 AM

    Becoming whole again... interesting verse.. and so powerful... to bring out the loneliness of void... Good one shot... Thanks

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  12. Steve IsaakNovember 29, 2010 at 12:19 AM

    Relatable, to the point, smart-minded.

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