I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
Sunday, November 21, 2010
Sunday sketches and 160
Am an empty shell no use come take my life But not my muse today would not matter to me a year from now unhappy, insecure, ashamed your life would but be a sorry excuse
the sketch is just hauntingly beautiful. i agree very intense are the eyes...as are the words...full of emotion. you are very good with a pencil as well as your words!! never take the muse!!! xxoo
Wow, both the verse and sketch are made for each other, they seem to go together perfectly. As well as the eyes, I find the mouth or almost lack of one especially haunting, quite mesmerising in a way.
wow. intense eyes on the pic...go well with the words...not ready to be taken yet...
ReplyDeletethe sketch is just hauntingly beautiful. i agree very intense are the eyes...as are the words...full of emotion. you are very good with a pencil as well as your words!! never take the muse!!! xxoo
ReplyDeleteThose eyes could burn holes through steel and your 160 is equally as intense. Thanks for playing.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem and sketch, awesome eyes.
ReplyDeleteVery intense indeed. So much raw emotion in that sketch and in the words.
ReplyDeletebetween the intense eyes and lack of mouth, this piece begs for a story.... life can be so hard.
ReplyDeletethis one is hard, I see abuse as I look at it. Strong image
ReplyDeleteThank you all so much for your kind comments and seeing the lovely green in a barren land..
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Go well with words and sketch.
ReplyDeleteWow, both the verse and sketch are made for each other, they seem to go together perfectly. As well as the eyes, I find the mouth or almost lack of one especially haunting, quite mesmerising in a way.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely very intense... nice use of shading!
ReplyDeletehmmmm.. this one is pretty intense- good 160!
ReplyDeleteMy fave line- come take my life
But not my muse
Hugs xx