I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
wow. intense eyes on the pic...go well with the words...not ready to be taken yet...
the sketch is just hauntingly beautiful. i agree very intense are the eyes...as are the words...full of emotion. you are very good with a pencil as well as your words!! never take the muse!!! xxoo
Those eyes could burn holes through steel and your 160 is equally as intense. Thanks for playing.
Great poem and sketch, awesome eyes.
Very intense indeed. So much raw emotion in that sketch and in the words.
between the intense eyes and lack of mouth, this piece begs for a story.... life can be so hard.
this one is hard, I see abuse as I look at it. Strong image
Although I have been so discouraged in my life and felt like quitting, I'm not ready to give completely up!! Such sad words and perfect artwork piece to go with it. Wow. Thanks for joining us this week.
Thank you all so much for your kind comments and seeing the lovely green in a barren land..
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Go well with words and sketch.
Wow, both the verse and sketch are made for each other, they seem to go together perfectly. As well as the eyes, I find the mouth or almost lack of one especially haunting, quite mesmerising in a way.
Definitely very intense... nice use of shading!
hmmmm.. this one is pretty intense- good 160!My fave line- come take my life But not my museHugs xx