I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
this is brilliant, and very relatable;)
aching to touchunfazed by reality...whew...shivers....
I know that feeling! Nice piece.
It's a joy to see so much expressed in so few words.http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/22/jingles-poetry-potluck-the-first-time/
looking deeply into the face we cherish!!! :( nice!
magical imagery...This is unbeatable entry.Thanks for sharing, my friend.your talent makes me smile...
memories are good but miserable when we identify with it.
Well caressed is the face that feels your hand upon it.
How beautiful and so powerful. It reminds me of the first flush of young love.On a different note I have been trying to add you as a FB friend but have been unable to do so. If you are interested then perhaps you could try the FB icon on the sidebar of my blog.
I've had a few moments of this happen myself, nicely done!
ohhh that desire...
week 11 potluck awards/treats 4 uThanks for the beautiful contribution to week 11, hope to see you next Monday!Happy Thursday!Happy Thanksgiving Holiday if you celebrate!
This is the perfect poem to explain what lovesick really is. Loved it!