How beautiful and so powerful. It reminds me of the first flush of young love.
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this is brilliant, and very relatable;)
ReplyDeleteawesome..
ReplyDeleteaching to touch
ReplyDeleteunfazed by reality...
whew...shivers....
I know that feeling! Nice piece.
ReplyDeleteIt's a joy to see so much expressed in so few words.
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looking deeply into the face we cherish!!! :( nice!
ReplyDeletemagical imagery...
ReplyDeleteThis is unbeatable entry.
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
your talent makes me smile...
memories are good but miserable when we identify with it.
ReplyDeleteWell caressed is the face that feels your hand upon it.
ReplyDeleteHow beautiful and so powerful. It reminds me of the first flush of young love.
ReplyDeleteOn a different note I have been trying to add you as a FB friend but have been unable to do so. If you are interested then perhaps you could try the FB icon on the sidebar of my blog.
deep..
ReplyDeleteI've had a few moments of this happen myself, nicely done!
ReplyDeleteohhh that desire...
ReplyDeleteThis is the perfect poem to explain what lovesick really is. Loved it!
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