Clipped wings, chipped dreams, watery sighs..
Yet on the wings of hope,
and a song I fly....
copyright*budhaaah*
Friday Poetically with Brian Miller
Friday, May 6, 2011
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I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/ and yet I float/ In debt and yet/ - I hope..
keep flying on those wings of hope...i like watery sighs...nice touch
ReplyDeleteyes - you can fly on wings of hope...magical isn't it..you painted a beautiful picture of a big yes in difficulties...thanks
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and poignant. A lot of feeling in a few words.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy the "wings of hope" and "a song". How can you not fly!
ReplyDeleteI'm flying along with you. Concise, clear, meaningful.
ReplyDeleteI love how uncluttered this is. Less is more. Excellent! :D
ReplyDeleteConcise and dreamy, I'm really enjoying dipping my toes in your work, it always makes me think. So little said here, leaves me open to thinking there's more to explore ;)
ReplyDeleteOh wow! All is said!
ReplyDeleteAnna :o]
Brilliant, enjoyed it and now I'm flying!
ReplyDeleteNicely done!
ReplyDeletesweet and to the point. no ? asked well done. #aspirer
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