Thursday, February 10, 2011

The birthing of shit..

Looking inwards
found nothing
but shit

a cesspool
spiralling downwards
till it found release

and splat!
fell flat
on the floor
in a heap


copyright*budhaaah*
For Brian's Theme Thursday at http://themethursday.blogspot.com/
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6 comments:

  1. Major MackFebruary 10, 2011 at 8:14 PM

    mmm what a picture.....shit.....

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  2. Full-On-ForwardFebruary 10, 2011 at 11:28 PM

    Crap-I Love it!

    J

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  3. the walking manFebruary 11, 2011 at 5:05 AM

    As long as it's birthed no one can say you are full of shit anymore. Let that baby go splat!

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  4. Rachel HoytFebruary 11, 2011 at 4:55 PM

    LOL. A spectacularly poopy poem... does that sound like an insult? Cuz I loved it. :)

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2011 at 1:59 PM

    Productivity at its best.

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  6. Brian MillerFebruary 15, 2011 at 3:47 AM

    well that is certainly visceral...better to get it out than keep it in though...

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