Tuesday, January 25, 2011

one shot

come to me..
Whilst there is light
and the path still be seen
rush to me - rush to me
for soon the darkness will be

whilst there is time - come to me..


copyright*budhaaah*
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12 comments:

  1. eyeographyJanuary 25, 2011 at 10:04 AM

    "come to me while there is light"..
    very well written :)

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  2. Brian MillerJanuary 25, 2011 at 10:49 AM

    running quickly...smiles. nice call for a response...

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  3. SYJanuary 25, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    I have to wonder what we're rushing to..

    Is it love, life.. I guess it could b anything

    great read,
    - Sy

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  4. Full-On-ForwardJanuary 25, 2011 at 10:02 PM

    Beautiful---Head towards the light!!!

    J

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  5. ReflectionsJanuary 25, 2011 at 11:24 PM

    And to this, we, each independently come to see... is this the beginning of a light at the end of the tunnel?

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  6. budh.aaahJanuary 26, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    Thanks Sumit

    Brian :) you are priceless.

    Sy..its love and life and hope..there has to be hope

    Thanks a ton John

    Reflections, Oh yes could be.

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  7. the walking manJanuary 26, 2011 at 4:36 AM

    Soon you will reprise from Beethoven to Mozart.

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  8. budh.aaahJanuary 26, 2011 at 6:00 AM

    And is that a good thing or a bad thing WM?

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  9. signed...bkmJanuary 26, 2011 at 8:21 PM

    Oh this is so beautiful...leaves a sigh in my breathe...thank you....bkm

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  10. KavitaJanuary 26, 2011 at 9:18 PM

    Whheeww! I hear ya, Budhaaah... Sometimes, we ask them to come to us... and sometimes, we go towards 'em.. I wonder which is better...
    Right now, I sit with a transparent umbrella, watching it snow..

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  11. LauraJanuary 27, 2011 at 4:35 AM

    beautiful...so happy to have stopped by to breathe this in.

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  12. Felicity Grace TerryJanuary 27, 2011 at 5:45 AM

    I'm picturing this as the words of a mother to her child. As always, beautiful words.

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