I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
nice...to me this feels like one of those moemnts if not captured could be lost forever...
Not let go in vain...what a corker of an ending line. Loved the smooth transition buhaaah :)
Like how you seem to get both stanzas to rhyme and express a potential missed opportunity very well. Cheers
Sounds beautiful. Wish I was more poetic so I can grasp the meaning.
ah yes - let it not go in vain...can hear the beat..
grab the moment... :)
Great capture, well done. Gay @beachanny
Never let go. I always am on that ride. switching seats, moving, twinning and generally speaking sometimes though rare...I just have nothing to say.
let's light it up :)