Friday, January 14, 2011

I have been through this
but once before
but never once
met the twain..

now tis my chance
as it yours be
let it not
go in vain..

copyright*budhaaah*
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11 comments:

  1. ValerieJanuary 14, 2011 at 1:59 AM

    Very good.

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  2. Brian MillerJanuary 14, 2011 at 3:01 AM

    nice...to me this feels like one of those moemnts if not captured could be lost forever...

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 6:25 AM

    Not let go in vain...what a corker of an ending line. Loved the smooth transition buhaaah :)

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  4. dustusJanuary 14, 2011 at 7:19 AM

    Like how you seem to get both stanzas to rhyme and express a potential missed opportunity very well. Cheers

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  5. DebJanuary 14, 2011 at 7:39 AM

    Sounds beautiful. Wish I was more poetic so I can grasp the meaning.

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  6. Maude LynnJanuary 14, 2011 at 8:15 AM

    Nicely done.

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  7. ClaudiaJanuary 14, 2011 at 8:29 AM

    ah yes - let it not go in vain...can hear the beat..

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 10:25 AM

    grab the moment... :)

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  9. BeachannyJanuary 14, 2011 at 7:12 PM

    Great capture, well done. Gay @beachanny

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  10. the walking manJanuary 15, 2011 at 6:59 AM

    Never let go. I always am on that ride. switching seats, moving, twinning and generally speaking sometimes though rare...I just have nothing to say.

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  11. UnknownJanuary 15, 2011 at 4:15 PM

    let's light it up :)

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