Friday, January 14, 2011

I have been through this
but once before
but never once
met the twain..

now tis my chance
as it yours be
let it not
go in vain..

copyright*budhaaah*

11 comments:

  1. nice...to me this feels like one of those moemnts if not captured could be lost forever...

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  2. Not let go in vain...what a corker of an ending line. Loved the smooth transition buhaaah :)

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  3. Like how you seem to get both stanzas to rhyme and express a potential missed opportunity very well. Cheers

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  4. Sounds beautiful. Wish I was more poetic so I can grasp the meaning.

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  5. ah yes - let it not go in vain...can hear the beat..

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  6. Great capture, well done. Gay @beachanny

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  7. Never let go. I always am on that ride. switching seats, moving, twinning and generally speaking sometimes though rare...I just have nothing to say.

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