I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
love the contrast in textures in the first several lines...win we must, yes...
Oh it does, and has done for centuries now.You need about a dozen for a good sized store building. These days they are mainly used for decoration, as they were always made from real stone and quite handsome.I am ambivalent about the pronunciation of succour :-), and probably unanimous in that.Comes from reading poems out loud in my head. If that is indeed possible.Oh dear, I'd better stop...
Win we must to conquer all with a strong determination or else the terrain continues to be steep and we can never reach the end. Well thought lines here!!
Sometimes knowledge comes in a flash. but for most of us things are always through 'Steep stone terrain' and sweet morbid sentimentalism, all are illusions..what else? may be my innate Raja quality always throws me into a profound egotism but i believe whatever comes just face the brute, and no compromise. that is a lesson for all life - face the brute whether thorny path, morbid weaknesses, only one thing always count - face it boldly. the hardships of life fall back when we cease to flee before them.**********this is an incredible verse. I like it very much. inspiration comes from anywhere, just do not make the fire die inside.
welcome to poets rally.cute piece.
Beautiful words... really well done:-)
Very good word choice, alliteration, vivid imagery--to the point--I really liked this.
The human condition shines through. -J
Short and simple, yet solid, with a strong message.
The inherent message conveyed is stronger than stones.
Thanks a ton everyone for your precious visit and the kind comments.Yes Brian,even though taught otherwise - winning sometimes is everything right win we must even if it be for self preservation..Nanka, I couldnt get through to your blogAhh Shubhajit,You use the word incredible and that warms me old heart :)
Lovely poem. I suppose you're right - we must win...at something otherwise we're just losers huh.
Strong and powerful poetry..."Steep stone terrainweak resolvesweet succour"Amazing... :)
I like short and sweet! Keep pushing for the victory, awesome..http://chickunderconstruction.wordpress.com/2010/11/21/sunday-morning/
Thank you for the thoughtful, stony thoughts.
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