Wednesday, December 1, 2010

one shot wednesday and photo prompt




What paradise we lost
for the distance be too long
from my heart to yours
- sweet - all gone

copyright*budhaaah*
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23 comments:

  1. I still see sugar cane growing over yonder.

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  3. How beautiful and it brought back such bitter sweet memories of a long distance romance I had when I was younger.

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  4. Nice flow in a few short lines. Also love the pun in line one.

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  5. i LOVE this poem. short and sad and so utterly true about lost love. (sigh, sniff, lump in throat).

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  6. Ah, so this is your "Paradise Lost" is it? (LOL!)

    Nice One Shot - it fits the pic well!

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  7. You captured a deep sentiment with this one. So simple yet it says a lot.

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  8. awesome!! really nice :)

    cheers from Uruguay

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  9. just heard about this blog and already loving it

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  10. photo and verse...perfect combo:) brilliant.

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  11. Very nicely done... short but oh so sweet.

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  12. Few words revealed a saga here ! Sad, but so beautifully written, Budhaaah.. emotions well expressed..

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  13. Thank you all so much for the lovely comments. I do appreciate having you all around me..our souls connecting at times..understanding

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  14. well done, in tandem with the picture ;)

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  15. superb shot, you could make a postcard out it it, sell it and get some nice earnings

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  16. Really nicely written. Did you also take the photo?

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  17. The photo selection for the beautiful verse is great.

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  18. Dear Budh.aaah

    All gone.. lovely... thought.


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  19. Succinct, heartbreaking, excellent.

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  20. I love poems like this.Short yet deep.So much to feel in such few words.Hope to write like this someday.

    Absolutely heartfelt one shot!

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