Wednesday, December 1, 2010

one shot wednesday and photo prompt




What paradise we lost
for the distance be too long
from my heart to yours
- sweet - all gone

copyright*budhaaah*
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22 comments:

  1. the walking manDecember 1, 2010 at 2:29 AM

    I still see sugar cane growing over yonder.

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  2. Felicity Grace TerryDecember 1, 2010 at 3:01 AM

    How beautiful and it brought back such bitter sweet memories of a long distance romance I had when I was younger.

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  3. dustusDecember 1, 2010 at 3:44 AM

    Nice flow in a few short lines. Also love the pun in line one.

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  4. kjDecember 1, 2010 at 5:42 AM

    i LOVE this poem. short and sad and so utterly true about lost love. (sigh, sniff, lump in throat).

    ♥

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  5. BubbaDecember 1, 2010 at 7:59 AM

    Ah, so this is your "Paradise Lost" is it? (LOL!)

    Nice One Shot - it fits the pic well!

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  6. Myrna R.December 1, 2010 at 10:33 AM

    You captured a deep sentiment with this one. So simple yet it says a lot.

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  7. Gabriela AbaloDecember 1, 2010 at 11:08 AM

    awesome!! really nice :)

    cheers from Uruguay

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  8. A Plain ObserverDecember 1, 2010 at 2:44 PM

    There are regrets

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  9. AlexDecember 1, 2010 at 3:40 PM

    just heard about this blog and already loving it

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  10. AnonymousDecember 1, 2010 at 4:23 PM

    photo and verse...perfect combo:) brilliant.

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  11. ReflectionsDecember 1, 2010 at 9:22 PM

    Very nicely done... short but oh so sweet.

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  12. AnonymousDecember 1, 2010 at 9:34 PM

    Few words revealed a saga here ! Sad, but so beautifully written, Budhaaah.. emotions well expressed..

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  13. budh.aaahDecember 1, 2010 at 9:42 PM

    Thank you all so much for the lovely comments. I do appreciate having you all around me..our souls connecting at times..understanding

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  14. honkhonkptDecember 1, 2010 at 10:25 PM

    Simple, but good! :)

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  15. Major MackDecember 1, 2010 at 11:33 PM

    well done, in tandem with the picture ;)

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  16. SamDecember 2, 2010 at 12:03 AM

    superb shot, you could make a postcard out it it, sell it and get some nice earnings

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  17. David DavidsonDecember 2, 2010 at 6:38 PM

    Really nicely written. Did you also take the photo?

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  18. PN SubramanianDecember 2, 2010 at 7:26 PM

    The photo selection for the beautiful verse is great.

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  19. Shashidhar SharmaDecember 2, 2010 at 11:46 PM

    Dear Budh.aaah

    All gone.. lovely... thought.


    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  20. gautami tripathyDecember 3, 2010 at 6:13 AM

    Beautiful!

    retrieval

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  21. Steve IsaakDecember 3, 2010 at 2:07 PM

    Succinct, heartbreaking, excellent.

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  22. June_ButterflyDecember 3, 2010 at 4:08 PM

    I love poems like this.Short yet deep.So much to feel in such few words.Hope to write like this someday.

    Absolutely heartfelt one shot!

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