Sunday, December 19, 2010

Reflections, Interpretations and Musings...and the blues

I have this void in me
that needs, craves
forever.
The only one thing
I need to denounce..yet desire
ignore…and yet fill...

experiencing the intensity,
I let it bathe me with its touch
then shrug
and hey again I - am me -

Smug I have it all figured out
but the void gapes...an endless blue pit
and again pulls me in

copyright*budhaaah*
for Jingle W15 - Reflections, Interpretations and Musings...
for http://smilingsally.blogspot.com/
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22 comments:

  1. AnonymousDecember 19, 2010 at 9:34 PM

    Strong writing - I love the last stanza best:
    "Smug I have it all figured out
    but the void gapes...an endless blue pit
    and again pulls me in" - I think this has a lovely rhythm with the pause like a deep breath that pull you in.

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  2. Vibhuti BhandarkarDecember 19, 2010 at 9:46 PM

    Everytime I visit here I am amazed at the maturity of your thoughts. True to your name, you have insightful thoughts and I enjoy reading them! :D
    Thanks

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  3. SamDecember 19, 2010 at 11:01 PM

    the void that craves forever beautiful

    When you stare into the abyss the abyss stares back at you.
    Friedrich Nietzsche

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  4. SHUBHAJITDecember 19, 2010 at 11:49 PM

    It happens. Don't worry, I believe it happens to even the highest of human being. Don't wash away all those things in one sweep, let the thing comes and goes, always discriminate, and above all be brave and remain compassionate.

    ****

    I am thankful for your insightful comment in my latest write-up. I read it with of utmost concentration and found it very profound.

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  5. Kodjo DeynooDecember 19, 2010 at 11:52 PM

    yea very strong writing, hitting on addiction

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  6. AnonymousDecember 20, 2010 at 12:22 AM

    lovely thought buddhaaah. mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/

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  7. NankaDecember 20, 2010 at 1:41 AM

    A powerful desire with great energy and keeping it at this pace you are nearly there away from being sucked into the nothingness of nonexistence.

    Well thought out poem!!

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  8. nothingprofoundDecember 20, 2010 at 4:38 AM

    The void is just a thought, nothingness is just a thought. One survives it, and moves on.

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  9. eyeographyDecember 20, 2010 at 4:59 AM

    Nice work...
    Thanks for sharing :)

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  10. the walking manDecember 20, 2010 at 5:36 AM

    Never fall into a pit you did not dig with your own hands. It belongs to someone else, let them fall into it.

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  11. AnonymousDecember 20, 2010 at 7:07 AM

    what a honest piece, so well done...truly brilliant

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  12. Felicity Grace TerryDecember 20, 2010 at 7:59 AM

    It always amazes me how much of yourself you share. Best wishes as always.

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  13. Other MaryDecember 20, 2010 at 8:03 AM

    I think the blue void calls to us all - this is very well done.

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  14. AnonymousDecember 20, 2010 at 12:17 PM

    a little taste of duality here, with its push-me-pull-you quality... I like it very much, well done!

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  15. SmilingSallyDecember 20, 2010 at 3:32 PM

    Aw, this is the sad blue.

    Happy Blue Monday anyway!

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  16. Ramesh SoodDecember 21, 2010 at 12:11 AM

    Hi, I think my first visit.. and I am happy that I did.. enjoyed your poem and the expression..

    Do honor me with your visit..what do you say.!

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  17. AnonymousDecember 21, 2010 at 1:23 AM

    It is so curious that no matter the circumstance, we always want more, need more. I crave forever too.

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  18. Brian MillerDecember 21, 2010 at 3:54 AM

    yeah when i feel i have it all figured out...it is a pretty good sign i am on my way down...

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  19. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 21, 2010 at 12:27 PM

    wow,
    rocking entry..

    A++

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  20. AnonymousDecember 21, 2010 at 6:30 PM

    A great write!

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  21. AnonymousDecember 25, 2010 at 5:32 AM

    I've been trying to reach your page for days and it will say this link is broken :) and today finally managed, just wanted to say thank you for all your comments on my blog and the visits! Much appreciated! Happy holidays!

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  22. AnonymousDecember 26, 2010 at 5:04 PM

    Seems like the void is here to stay.Beautifully described:)

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