I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
spot on my friend...beautiful.cheers
when science stops, philosophy starts, and when philosophy stops, spiritualism starts..I don't know whether you conscious or not but I believe you are in that transition of philosophy and spiritualism, else how could one express the one of the deepest secrets in so simple words..Great!
very enlightened! here's mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
smiles. perhaps stone can be broken...with love...
Oh I totally agree with Shubhajit. You really have a way with words simplified with the most complicated of all things. You "make sense"! Loved this piece!
Thank you david :)cupcakelady,ThanksBooguloo,Ah one looks for the 'I understand' spark..isnt that the eternal quest in a relationshipShubhajit,But we are mired in both - the transition tugget at by the ever material state of being...Fiveloaf,You genius youAhh Brian,Glad you came by. Like I said I am kinda getting used to seeing you around here and there (FB :)Yes perhaps love can do it after all. There is a couplet by an ancient scholar Tulsidasji, which says when translated - practice makes perfect and the rope sliding in and out of the well to fetch water over the years dents the stony exterior of the well...so there is hope for me yet eh Brian :)Deb,Just being told by me pardner that I make no sense at all - your comment here lifts my spirits :)
lovely poemfor me reads as a romance or for the divine ~
love's integral part..love this line...how divine!Thanks for contributing to potluck poetry.A+
I agree as well, the last line is just wonderful!
I like what Brian said above. Hmm...catchy adn deep words here to. Very well done.
Faith, Hope and Love--and the Greatest of these is?????AWESOME!!! I'm Following!John
Tammie, Jingle,Tootsie, mmm, John,Thank you ever so much. Aww Jingle, I am gettin good grades now..love it :)
Just two short verses that simply tell the story most will relate to! Beoootiful.I am following you!
Oh... there a TON of reality in this one! I think I can totally relate to it... (ugghhh)But like you say, it's all part of love... I wonder why!!! Very beautifully written, Budhaaah..as ever!
Lovely..I love it so much :)
Ahhh!! So beautiful.. I like it very much.. Great ...ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTweet me @VerseEveryDay
Vibhuti :)Thanks Kavita, Why is what keeps us going back to it for dont we all love mysteriesSumit, Shashi, hey thanks :)