Its not as If
I long for thee
or for your stony heart
The craving in my soul
for you is
love's integral part
copyright*budhaaah*
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Monday, December 6, 2010
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I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/ and yet I float/ In debt and yet/ - I hope..
spot on my friend...beautiful.
ReplyDeletecheers
I understand.
ReplyDeletewhen science stops, philosophy starts, and when philosophy stops, spiritualism starts..I don't know whether you conscious or not but I believe you are in that transition of philosophy and spiritualism, else how could one express the one of the deepest secrets in so simple words..Great!
ReplyDeletevery enlightened! here's mine- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
ReplyDeletesmiles. perhaps stone can be broken...with love...
ReplyDeleteOh I totally agree with Shubhajit. You really have a way with words simplified with the most complicated of all things. You "make sense"!
ReplyDeleteLoved this piece!
Thank you david :)
ReplyDeletecupcakelady,
Thanks
Booguloo,
Ah one looks for the 'I understand' spark..isnt that the eternal quest in a relationship
Shubhajit,
But we are mired in both - the transition tugget at by the ever material state of being...
Fiveloaf,
You genius you
Ahh Brian,
Glad you came by. Like I said I am kinda getting used to seeing you around here and there (FB :)
Yes perhaps love can do it after all. There is a couplet by an ancient scholar Tulsidasji, which says when translated - practice makes perfect and the rope sliding in and out of the well to fetch water over the years dents the stony exterior of the well...so there is hope for me yet eh Brian :)
Deb,
Just being told by me pardner that I make no sense at all - your comment here lifts my spirits :)
lovely poem
ReplyDeletefor me reads as a romance or for the divine ~
love's integral part..
ReplyDeletelove this line...
how divine!
Thanks for contributing to potluck poetry.
A+
I agree as well, the last line is just wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI like what Brian said above. Hmm...catchy adn deep words here to. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteFaith, Hope and Love--and the Greatest of these is?????
ReplyDeleteAWESOME!!! I'm Following!
John
Tammie, Jingle,Tootsie, mmm, John,
ReplyDeleteThank you ever so much.
Aww Jingle, I am gettin good grades now..love it :)
Just two short verses that simply tell the story most will relate to! Beoootiful.
ReplyDeleteI am following you!
Oh... there a TON of reality in this one! I think I can totally relate to it... (ugghhh)
ReplyDeleteBut like you say, it's all part of love... I wonder why!!!
Very beautifully written, Budhaaah..as ever!
Lovely..I love it so much :)
ReplyDeleteAhhh!! So beautiful.. I like it very much.. Great ...
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Tweet me @VerseEveryDay
Vibhuti :)Thanks
ReplyDeleteKavita, Why is what keeps us going back to it for dont we all love mysteries
Sumit, Shashi, hey thanks :)