I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
Hrmmmmmmm... This one was tricky for me.. although very beautiful, I think I have to put me decoder glasses on.... Hrmmmmmmm....
I like this. Thanks for visiting my blog and leaving a nice comment. Just like "breaking up", relaxing is hard to do.
This one is excellent. A sort of sarcasm reflects i guess
Hi Jo,Tapping into your innermost emotions and feelings. Keep up the great work. Love it. Keep in touch. Rick
Makes you think for sure - and giving me a headache!http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/dark-teen/
Interesting piece. Feels like a love hate relationship between the sun and the rain, yet I can't tell which you love more.Happy Potluck. Here's my piecehttp://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/searching/
I like it's rocking..http://loveamongotherthings.wordpress.com/
And when the sun does that we get rainbows!http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2011/01/24/boundaries-jingles-poetry-potluck/
Nice play between the elements, and that suggestion that the sun has no right to kill the rain and will be blamed for it...captures a mood well.
the sun is breaking the laws...nice twist...happy potluck!http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/
this is a nice one buddhaaah! here's my potluck for this week: http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/08/04/here-for-you/
At first glance, it seems a simple piece, but on re-reading it, it really is a deeper statement about the powers of both rain and sun. I liked it. :)
I like this poem...thought provoking.
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