I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
i don't get it, but then again i've never been good at understanding poetry
Hi, nice to meet you. I've just read this and other pieces of your poetry. It's very good. Thanks for visiting my blog and reading the stories.
CAMB,thanks :)DA,Welcome2 d poem blog, hope it wasnt too rough a ride :)Valerie,I am a voracious reader, keep em coming. I have been reading since some time but of course dont leave much comments, but want to take this oppurtunity to say that you are exceptionally good.
If only it were that easy sometimes.. to erase pain from our hearts..short, simple but very heartfelt..nice..
Very nice, short and sweet poem. Keep writing.Thanks for your lovely and encouraging comment.
We can search here and there, in mountains, jungles, churches , temples but the lover resides deep inside and grin at us. He says, go child go everywhere but one day you will find me that i am the nearest of nearest.He is like eyes. the most nearest of us but we can't see.