I ran towards the light
but couldnt get past
his complicated sun..
The plethora of pink
in his straight lines
didnt let us have
too much fun..
copyright*budhaaah*
Wednesday, November 3, 2010
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I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/ and yet I float/ In debt and yet/ - I hope..
huh. intriguing piece...religeous symbolism?
ReplyDeleteI was going to ask the same, Brian...
ReplyDeleteVery thought provoking piece!
I think I understood the first stanza..but the second one was difficult
ReplyDeleteBrian, Its not religious symbolism at all, just talking about personal choices here..orientation to be precise.
ReplyDeleteDear Deb,
Guess you got the answer. Thanks!
Tomz,
Maybe with the explanation I gave here it might be easier to understand.