I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
Excellent!happiness is in unhappiness. queer is it not?
Shubhajit,Queer indeed yes. Just like creativity..
Interesting. The last two lines certainly made me think.
Funny how much pain there tends to be in love. Ok, not funny. Just strange.
sharp verse...love hurts so good...and sometimes bad.
I love to see "love" too. But it hurts when in vain. Is it worth it if in vain?
odd I was just thinking the other day how tired of the word love I am. I was sick past couple of days but am much better now. Note coming soon.
Hey Petty Witter,There's a futility to love/loving..so beautiful and yet..awitchtrying,Dont worry I got it when you wrote funny because thats the first word that comes to mind when I am faced with something that is but shouldnt be..Brian Miller,thanks for stopping by, I am begining to get used to your presence here :) ok you are right but sometimes the hurt's all badJust_because_today,Oh yes every bit of it is worth it..the pain I mean..even if in vain.Mark,Ever the cynic. Look forward to it :)