Burn their existence
drag em down into a mire
or rebuild completely
cleanse them with your fire..
put on these shoes
and remember
how you'd felt
then change the hand
that they've been dealt..
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Why give them the new hand. Take the new cards for yourself.
ReplyDeleteMark, earlier it was ..
ReplyDeleteBurn your existence
drag me down into a mire
or rebuild completely
and cleanse me with your fire
change the hand
that I’ve been dealt
put on these shoes
then maybe you can
remember how you felt..
-..then changed slowly as I typed it here.
Wow... this was one of your best pieces! Loved it!
ReplyDeleteDeb, that means a lot for me coming from you..thank you
ReplyDeleteput on these shoes
ReplyDeleteand remember
how you'd felt
then change the hand
that they've been dealt..
Waah ! wonderful.
Godiyalji :)
ReplyDeleteHowdy Bud. Thought I'd mosey over and return your favor. I don't do poetry, but a cuppa sounds fine.
ReplyDeleteHi Valance,
ReplyDeleteIf you dont do poetry then my other blog 'always budhaaah' will be just fine for you, though I aint as regular as this one there..still check it out if you have time.
So powerful - I love it.
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