Friday, September 17, 2010

burn..

Burn their existence
drag em down into a mire
or rebuild completely
cleanse them with your fire..

put on these shoes
and remember
how you'd felt
then change the hand
that they've been dealt..


copyright*budhaaah*

9 comments:

  1. Why give them the new hand. Take the new cards for yourself.

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  2. Mark, earlier it was ..

    Burn your existence
    drag me down into a mire
    or rebuild completely
    and cleanse me with your fire

    change the hand
    that I’ve been dealt
    put on these shoes
    then maybe you can
    remember how you felt..

    -..then changed slowly as I typed it here.

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  3. Wow... this was one of your best pieces! Loved it!

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  4. Deb, that means a lot for me coming from you..thank you

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  5. put on these shoes
    and remember
    how you'd felt
    then change the hand
    that they've been dealt..

    Waah ! wonderful.

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  6. Howdy Bud. Thought I'd mosey over and return your favor. I don't do poetry, but a cuppa sounds fine.

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  7. Hi Valance,
    If you dont do poetry then my other blog 'always budhaaah' will be just fine for you, though I aint as regular as this one there..still check it out if you have time.

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