Tuesday, May 24, 2011

One shot - where would I be?

If I had some - and if it be gone
- pray - where would then I 'll be?
the flow will ebb, the beat almost none
and life not - once what it could be....

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For One Shot Wednesday
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7 comments:

  1. Brian MillerMay 25, 2011 at 3:37 AM

    tricky little bit of word play today...perhaps a bit more sane...smiles.

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  2. ayalaMay 25, 2011 at 3:44 AM

    Short and to the point :)

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  3. the walking manMay 25, 2011 at 5:36 AM

    Ah...but it can be and could be what it has never been before.

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  4. ClaudiaMay 25, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    good question and indeed a tricky word play, leaving much room for interpretation

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  5. A Plain ObserverMay 25, 2011 at 6:47 PM

    Life is what it is, not what it could be, but what it is now. Not what we made of it, but what it ends up being.
    Lovely piece

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  6. KavitaMay 25, 2011 at 10:59 PM

    Aaahh.. reflective, concise and oh so honest!!
    Very nice!! Loved the way YOU wrote it!

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  7. masterymisteryJune 9, 2011 at 2:58 AM

    Don't make me think so hard! On the other hand...

    masterymistery at cosmic rapture

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