Thursday, April 7, 2011

Sticky..sticky..

Hot and humid
shirt sticking
to the wet skin..
she walks on
looking for the next whim

it doesnt come easy
dreaming needs a lot
of guts
but inside her
all she can hear
is the sound of her
heart breaking
shrill...

hot and wet
from the heat
the tears coursing down
her broken dreams...

copyright*budhaaah*
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9 comments:

  1. the walking manApril 8, 2011 at 3:49 AM

    If you have bravery and courage the heart may break but it will also heal.

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  2. Brian MillerApril 8, 2011 at 4:05 AM

    nice bit of a journey you took us on there emotionally...

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  3. G-ManApril 8, 2011 at 5:52 AM

    Budhaah...
    Sad and perfect.
    Perfectly Sad!
    Love your 55 My Friend.
    Very well written.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  4. gautami tripathyApril 8, 2011 at 9:05 AM

    Emotion laden...

    order of the day

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  5. BubbaApril 8, 2011 at 9:49 AM

    We walk in the rain, hiding our pain
    with the tear drops from the sky.

    Nice 55. :)

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  6. MonaApril 8, 2011 at 11:34 AM

    dreams can be so easily broken...

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  7. Maude LynnApril 8, 2011 at 12:07 PM

    Nice write!

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  8. Jannie FunsterApril 8, 2011 at 1:35 PM

    That's so sad. Maybe a swimming pool or the cool of ocean could ease her a bit. That and time.

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  9. Felicity Grace TerryApril 11, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    Here's to the healing of that heart.

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