Thursday, April 7, 2011

Sticky..sticky..

Hot and humid
shirt sticking
to the wet skin..
she walks on
looking for the next whim

it doesnt come easy
dreaming needs a lot
of guts
but inside her
all she can hear
is the sound of her
heart breaking
shrill...

hot and wet
from the heat
the tears coursing down
her broken dreams...

copyright*budhaaah*
Write a story in 55 words and go see G-man -http://g-man-mrknowitall.blogspot.com/

9 comments:

  1. If you have bravery and courage the heart may break but it will also heal.

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  2. nice bit of a journey you took us on there emotionally...

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  3. Budhaah...
    Sad and perfect.
    Perfectly Sad!
    Love your 55 My Friend.
    Very well written.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  4. We walk in the rain, hiding our pain
    with the tear drops from the sky.

    Nice 55. :)

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  5. dreams can be so easily broken...

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  6. That's so sad. Maybe a swimming pool or the cool of ocean could ease her a bit. That and time.

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  7. Here's to the healing of that heart.

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