Thursday, February 3, 2011

Paint - theme thursday

Paint the town red mixed dregs
just forced pegs of anxiety
Paint the world black,
neurologicalyy flat..Jack in the box beside me

Paint - sweet - my heart white
then pour colors bright for visual impact
let the white evaporate
this colorless fright out of our lives

or use what you may
for it does not matter
I have peace in my heart
and my love is blind..

copyright*budhaaah*
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9 comments:

  1. the walking manFebruary 3, 2011 at 3:38 AM

    Like the mid line rhyme.Peace and love are both in the right places kiddo.

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  2. Brian MillerFebruary 3, 2011 at 3:59 AM

    smiles. some fun rhyme...and you know peace and love are great things to cling to....

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  3. SYFebruary 3, 2011 at 10:44 AM

    this is very beautiful.. makes you see color in a whole new light..
    it does make you think of emotion

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  4. RJ ClarkenFebruary 3, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    A very colorful turn. I love the internal rhyme and how you create such striking imagery!

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  5. A Plain ObserverFebruary 3, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    and that is love, no matter what it remains love. Say what you want, do what you may...it remains love

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  6. Shail RaghuvanshiFebruary 4, 2011 at 12:14 AM

    Dear Budhaaah,

    Lovely use of colors in your poem. Finally, it is what you feel within....

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  7. Full-On-ForwardFebruary 4, 2011 at 1:07 AM

    Color-Blind.....

    Love every line!

    J

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 1:58 PM

    Nice. Fitting verbal paint job for a budhaaah, methinks.

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  9. Arian TejanoFebruary 10, 2011 at 12:12 AM

    that was breathless!

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