Sunday, February 6, 2011

love blues...



I still ache for you every day
My morning doesn’t open up on me
without showing me your face in its light
My ears don’t hear the birds sing
Till they hear your beautiful laughter..sighs
My eyes…don’t open till they see your smile
till a single drop from them trickles out and dies


copyright*budhaaah*
flash 55 and One Stop Poetry’s Sunday Picture Prompt Challenge.This great prompt was shot by photographer Sean McCormick.
Week 21 Poetry Potluck at jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/,http://carryontuesdayprompt.blogspot.com/
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18 comments:

  1. SHUBHAJITFebruary 6, 2011 at 10:37 AM

    Ah! these few lines epitomize the cruelest of human sentiments.How can we get rid of it? or is it necessary to get rid of it? no, i think so. we should be free to accept all emotions and detach at the same time.

    I relate to this poetry to an extent and thats why i am liking it a lot.

    the house is like a haunted house...

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  2. dustusFebruary 6, 2011 at 10:44 AM

    Sad lyrics, yet written very well. Like the rhyme of sighs and eyes leading into the final lines.

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  3. ClaudiaFebruary 6, 2011 at 11:53 AM

    ah - the love blues...the aching...the sighs...like it!

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  4. Brian MillerFebruary 6, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    lovely...the last line esp...loves a cruel master at times...

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  5. signed...bkmFebruary 6, 2011 at 7:28 PM

    very nice...and yes love can be sad and aching comes but it also goes...and it makes us stronger...bkm

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  6. TeresaFebruary 6, 2011 at 8:10 PM

    Such a sad heartbroken poem.

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  7. Celestial DreamzFebruary 6, 2011 at 10:01 PM

    sad .... portrayed beautifully.

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 6, 2011 at 10:22 PM

    love it buddhaah..thank you for sharing.. here's my potluck..
    http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/broken-home/

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  9. KavitaFebruary 7, 2011 at 1:05 AM

    Ack!! A pain too deeply felt, B... I can only hope it's fiction here...
    A highly evocative piece indeed... very nicely written!

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 2:48 AM

    *Le Sigh*
    We have all been here..nicely penned!

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 6:38 AM

    Beautiful poem and very fitting picture.

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  12. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 7, 2011 at 9:02 AM

    well expressed feelings,
    lovely job.
    Cheers,

    A++

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  13. AnonymousFebruary 7, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    Poignant and sad. You capture the feeling beautifully.

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  14. Kimiko Love MartinezFebruary 8, 2011 at 7:18 AM

    Haven't we all felt that amazing high and devastating low of all-consuming love? Nicely done.

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  15. Felicity Grace TerryFebruary 8, 2011 at 8:01 AM

    How sad, I can feel the pain of lost love.

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  16. Kodjo DeynooFebruary 8, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Yea very sad, just beautifully written

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  17. AnonymousFebruary 8, 2011 at 6:37 PM

    a stark write - kudos

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  18. JamieDedesFebruary 8, 2011 at 7:11 PM

    Sadness well expressed and hope the writing of it is healing for you. Thanks for including it in Potluck.

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