Sunday, February 6, 2011

love blues...



I still ache for you every day
My morning doesn’t open up on me
without showing me your face in its light
My ears don’t hear the birds sing
Till they hear your beautiful laughter..sighs
My eyes…don’t open till they see your smile
till a single drop from them trickles out and dies


copyright*budhaaah*
flash 55 and One Stop Poetry’s Sunday Picture Prompt Challenge.This great prompt was shot by photographer Sean McCormick.
Week 21 Poetry Potluck at jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/,http://carryontuesdayprompt.blogspot.com/

18 comments:

  1. Ah! these few lines epitomize the cruelest of human sentiments.How can we get rid of it? or is it necessary to get rid of it? no, i think so. we should be free to accept all emotions and detach at the same time.

    I relate to this poetry to an extent and thats why i am liking it a lot.

    the house is like a haunted house...

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  2. Sad lyrics, yet written very well. Like the rhyme of sighs and eyes leading into the final lines.

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  3. ah - the love blues...the aching...the sighs...like it!

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  4. lovely...the last line esp...loves a cruel master at times...

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  5. very nice...and yes love can be sad and aching comes but it also goes...and it makes us stronger...bkm

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  6. love it buddhaah..thank you for sharing.. here's my potluck..
    http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/03/12/broken-home/

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  7. Ack!! A pain too deeply felt, B... I can only hope it's fiction here...
    A highly evocative piece indeed... very nicely written!

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  8. *Le Sigh*
    We have all been here..nicely penned!

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  9. Beautiful poem and very fitting picture.

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  10. well expressed feelings,
    lovely job.
    Cheers,

    A++

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  11. Poignant and sad. You capture the feeling beautifully.

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  12. Haven't we all felt that amazing high and devastating low of all-consuming love? Nicely done.

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  13. How sad, I can feel the pain of lost love.

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  14. Yea very sad, just beautifully written

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  15. Sadness well expressed and hope the writing of it is healing for you. Thanks for including it in Potluck.

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