Wednesday, January 12, 2011

one shot and Potluck

Your face I hide - sweet - in my mind
your name - quivers through my soul
I said your name - almost - but thrice
and bitter took its toll..

I tread as much - I dare to say
I long for destiny
which comes and spreads
upon my being - sweet -
your identity..

copyright*budhaaah*
for one shot wednesday @ http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/2011/01/one-shot-wednesday-week-28.html and poetry potluck
One Stop Poetry Form Monday-Ballads

18 comments:

  1. and may that destiny find you when the time is right...

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  2. As always, beutiful. I feel you put your heart and soul into your verse, that these are more than just words to you, which makes your posting them even more special.

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  3. I like your style, short and to the point

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  5. Hi. Like this a lot I find myself reaching out and stopping at times too but then I usually am able to get over my fright of flight or fight and go.

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  6. Reminds me of crushes and how it feels to be in love with someone who might not be aware of it. Nice write!

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  7. The heart is so fragile sometimes, yet it's supposed to be the strongest muscle in the body. :\

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  8. Lovely little piece - a genuine outpouring of affection. Does she return it? Does she know? Or is this merely the musing of a heart, watching from afar? Questions, questions, but one cannot doubt the genuine nature of the heart here.

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  9. I sometimes wonder does the heart really "feel" for if it does, how does it thrive on an emotional void?

    I love your writes:-)

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  10. the longing for that special one...

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  11. lovely singing lyrics ....very nice read...bkm

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  12. And when this happens, one can but surrender... don't you think?
    There was something very musical about this one, Budhaah...with traces of melancholia in it.
    Very nicely done!

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  13. smooth flow,

    well put.
    Glad to see you share.

    A+

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  14. Lovely piece. I like the flow and the sentiment. Good job!

    My potluck piece
    http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2011/01/18/melody-harmony-rhythm/

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