Wednesday, December 15, 2010

One shot

To you my pulsating God
Goes out my pious thought

Smiling, spent
I inhale your scent
Giving vent
- your love -
my sweet intent


copyright*budhaaah*
for http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/2010/12/one-shot-wednesday-week-23.html and poetry potluck-'peace,relaxation, and spirituality'

20 comments:

  1. Your intent is sweet and so is your prayerful poem.

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  2. oh, tender surrender.

    love the rhyme!

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  3. "Smiling, spent" really made me think of someone having attained Nirvana...
    Something very peaceful about this poem..
    Very soothingly put, Budhaaah..

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  4. Love is indeed a sweet intent. Nice One Shot!

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  5. Sweet and wonderful..
    "Smiling, spent
    I inhale your scent
    Giving vent
    - your love -
    my sweet intent"

    Lovely :)

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  6. It's great for me cause it's got a smile in it :)

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  7. Love the feel to this prayerful poem. Nice.

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  8. Myrna,
    Yes prayerful was the intention and sweet :)

    Claudia,
    Hmm.mm :p

    DELi,
    Oh and ditto for ur rhyme 'tender surrender'

    Kavita,
    It did make me feel peaceful at the time - that feeling

    Yes Eric,
    I agree totally. Glad you liked it.

    Sumit,
    Gee thanks :)

    Smile,
    :) :) :) :) :)

    Reflections,
    Thank you so much..

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  9. Thanks Brut

    David,
    you write so tender that I take it as a huge compliment

    JBT,
    Love is a prayer...more so when it is unrequited

    Major,
    Glad you like it :)

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  10. Nice sentiment in your poem which is put across neatly.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/01/31/first-date/

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  11. I inhale your scent ... your love.. Yes! Love is what make is feel the sweet of the day!

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  12. Thanks for sharing, do tag us if you can.

    your words are super witty.

    A++

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  13. Love "smiling" and "spent." Great image!

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  14. Aahh... this one was most definitely peaceful, B..
    Love does some really wonderful things indeed..

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