To you my pulsating God
Goes out my pious thought
Smiling, spent
I inhale your scent
Giving vent
- your love -
my sweet intent
copyright*budhaaah*
for http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/2010/12/one-shot-wednesday-week-23.html and poetry potluck-'peace,relaxation, and spirituality'
Wednesday, December 15, 2010
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Your intent is sweet and so is your prayerful poem.
ReplyDeletehmmmmm...
ReplyDeleteoh, tender surrender.
ReplyDeletelove the rhyme!
"Smiling, spent" really made me think of someone having attained Nirvana...
ReplyDeleteSomething very peaceful about this poem..
Very soothingly put, Budhaaah..
Love is indeed a sweet intent. Nice One Shot!
ReplyDeleteSweet and wonderful..
ReplyDelete"Smiling, spent
I inhale your scent
Giving vent
- your love -
my sweet intent"
Lovely :)
It's great for me cause it's got a smile in it :)
ReplyDeleteLove the feel to this prayerful poem. Nice.
ReplyDeleteMyrna,
ReplyDeleteYes prayerful was the intention and sweet :)
Claudia,
Hmm.mm :p
DELi,
Oh and ditto for ur rhyme 'tender surrender'
Kavita,
It did make me feel peaceful at the time - that feeling
Yes Eric,
I agree totally. Glad you liked it.
Sumit,
Gee thanks :)
Smile,
:) :) :) :) :)
Reflections,
Thank you so much..
tender and full of emotion
ReplyDeletelove a prayer. So sweet
ReplyDeleteThanks Brut
ReplyDeleteDavid,
you write so tender that I take it as a huge compliment
JBT,
Love is a prayer...more so when it is unrequited
Major,
Glad you like it :)
Nice sentiment in your poem which is put across neatly.
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I inhale your scent ... your love.. Yes! Love is what make is feel the sweet of the day!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing, do tag us if you can.
ReplyDeleteyour words are super witty.
A++
He is smiling too :)
ReplyDeleteLove "smiling" and "spent." Great image!
ReplyDeleteAahh... this one was most definitely peaceful, B..
ReplyDeleteLove does some really wonderful things indeed..