Monday, November 29, 2010

POETRY POTLUCK - Nature: Plants, Creatures and the Cosmos

Do you know what is
And can be..
Each creature
is wrapped in
his/her own reality
I hope we can
appreciate all
that there is –
We simply cant tell
the cosmos -
‘I want a Mulligan...a do over
Please’


copyright*budhaaah*

19 comments:

  1. Absolutely right. I liked this, read it three times and liked each reading more than the last.

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  2. Everyone gets second chance, nay, as many chances until we are perfect. What we are to do? Just floating..

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  3. Dear Budh.aaah

    Yes I agree... we can not expect a re-design or a recall of cosmic design... I liked your words.. 'Each creature
    is wrapped in
    his/her own reality '
    So perfect in its thought...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  4. love it,
    beautiful message.
    well put,
    Thanks for sharing....
    xxx

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  5. there are no do overs...we only appreciate what we have been given today...and there are so many small things we can appreciate...

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  6. I appreciate the way you are enabled to express. Beautiful. Thanks.

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  7. I like! :) Happy Potluck!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/the-farming-of-nature/

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  8. Yes, if only every decision came with a reset button. -J

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  9. Oh to have a do over....brilliant!

    cheers

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  10. Gratitude seems to be so distant sometimes.
    Awesome piece as always!

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  11. Mulligan, haven't heard that word for a long time. Lovely little piece, thanks.

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  12. Wouldn't it be great if we could have mulligans. My hubby won't even let me take them in golf!
    Your poem is direct and effective.

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  13. Lovely poem. I agree. I wish we could appreciate all the Cosmos has to offer.

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  14. Ok my dear freinds,

    Thank you all so much for your love and support/kind words.

    I too have used this word after ages and nobody seems to use it anymore.more's the pity because it is such a nice quaint word.

    I got the idea from a very good friend Rick who had used it in his recent post. Loved it so decided could use it for Jingle's theme of 'cosmos'. Thanks Rick, they all semmed to like it :)

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  15. Hi Jo,
    Words are free for all to use. Only some words should be used more often...love, cherish and hope.
    Beautiful poem.
    Rick

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  16. Potluck week 12 awards/treats, Enjoy

    Thank you a ton for the lovely contribution!
    Happy Friday!
    See you next time!

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  17. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/12/04/the-perfect-poet-award-4-poets-rally-week-34/

    award notice,
    Glad to read you today, prayers, hope all is well...


    let me know if you wish to be part of poets rally week 34.
    Happy Saturday!
    you rock!
    xxx

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  18. Brilliant contribution to potluck, poem on!

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  19. Greetings! How r u?

    You are invited to join our potluck week 13 at Jingle Poetry : http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/

    Write a poem fitting our week 13 theme (Dreams, Visions, Reveries), post it, and link in to our potluck, you are also allowed to link in unrelated poems. we are open Sunday, 8pm, American central time.

    We have had so much fun having you last week. I cannot wait seeing you on coming Monday again.

    Let me know if you have questions.

    Have A Weekend As Graceful As Your Writing!

    xoxox

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