Tuesday, November 9, 2010

One shot..

Fall..gently
to the ground
like leaves

and embrace me
like the earth
for eternity

copyright*budhaaah*
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11 comments:

  1. Brian MillerNovember 10, 2010 at 7:33 AM

    i wonder how the earth embraces? smiles. but what a fall it is...nice one shot!

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  2. dustusNovember 10, 2010 at 1:00 PM

    Appreciate the sense of gravity conveyed, both literally and in terms of human contact.

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  3. BubbaNovember 10, 2010 at 1:11 PM

    Short and sweet - a nice One Shot!

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  4. Steve IsaakNovember 10, 2010 at 1:22 PM

    I don't use the word "beautiful" much, but this is it. Good stuff.

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  5. ReflectionsNovember 10, 2010 at 7:28 PM

    Concise in form, deep in thoughts. Beautifully expressed.

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  6. budh.aaahNovember 10, 2010 at 8:33 PM

    Yes Brian,
    what a fall..the only kind that should be.

    Thank you so much Dustus, Eric, Steve and Reflections.

    Reflections, that poem/song was so sad that I cant get over it still..

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  7. Felicity Grace TerryNovember 11, 2010 at 2:57 AM

    how lovely. I think this would make a memorable reading at a funeral or is that me being a touch morbid?

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  8. DebNovember 11, 2010 at 8:39 AM

    Beautiful imagery.

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  9. awitchtryingNovember 11, 2010 at 9:03 AM

    Ooo... I really like this! It instills a bit of comfort. Thanks!

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  10. Shashidhar SharmaNovember 12, 2010 at 5:38 AM

    Beautiful short-haiku's and I enjoyed th picture that you created.. thanks for sharing

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  11. budh.aaahNovember 12, 2010 at 8:57 AM

    Thanks a ton Deb :)


    AWT,
    glad u liked it

    Shashi,
    Ok so this is how a Haiku is :) I was wondering just yesterday that I write poems but am practically illiterate in the language of poets :)

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