I am - and - I was/ I feel - and yet - I lost/ I am - in deep/
and yet I float/ In debt and yet/
- I hope..
i wonder how the earth embraces? smiles. but what a fall it is...nice one shot!
Appreciate the sense of gravity conveyed, both literally and in terms of human contact.
Short and sweet - a nice One Shot!
I don't use the word "beautiful" much, but this is it. Good stuff.
Concise in form, deep in thoughts. Beautifully expressed.
Yes Brian,what a fall..the only kind that should be.Thank you so much Dustus, Eric, Steve and Reflections.Reflections, that poem/song was so sad that I cant get over it still..
how lovely. I think this would make a memorable reading at a funeral or is that me being a touch morbid?
Ooo... I really like this! It instills a bit of comfort. Thanks!
Beautiful short-haiku's and I enjoyed th picture that you created.. thanks for sharingॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Thanks a ton Deb :)AWT,glad u liked itShashi,Ok so this is how a Haiku is :) I was wondering just yesterday that I write poems but am practically illiterate in the language of poets :)