Sunday, October 3, 2010

Fill me up
with your warmth
and treat me to this night..

stand just far enough to caress..
caress me with your sighs

you want to..outdo yourself
look at life with different eyes

leave this sad withereing heart
where life was long denied

No,did not happen overnight
It took centuries for me to die

did not know
that I was dead
till I shed a tear
a soul less cry



copyright*budhaaah*
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10 comments:

  1. डॉ. नूतन डिमरी गैरोला- नीतिOctober 3, 2010 at 10:51 AM

    so sad.. but so touching...bautiful poem

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  2. the walking manOctober 4, 2010 at 3:15 AM

    I can't shed tears anymore.

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  3. R. RameshOctober 4, 2010 at 5:21 AM

    ooff..deep.

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  4. DebOctober 4, 2010 at 7:32 AM

    *Nods*
    *Nods*
    *Nods*

    Beautiful piece...

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  5. awitchtryingOctober 4, 2010 at 9:41 AM

    Do you write these all on the days you post? As a poet, I have to ask. They're so beautiful! I'm so glad you commented on my blog and brought me here, thank you!

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  6. awitchtryingOctober 4, 2010 at 9:43 AM

    and I love the bit below your title- I am and I was/ I feel and yet I lost/ I am in deep/ and yet I float/ In debt and yet I hope I can really relate...

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  7. budh.aaahOctober 4, 2010 at 10:02 AM

    Dr Nutan,
    Thank you dear.

    Mark,
    Copius amount of tears still flow like the ganges here..

    Hi Ramesh,
    with the lovely sense of humor you have, you will definitely find it deep :)

    Deb,
    It means much to me thanks

    Awitchtrying,
    I sure am glad I went there too. And yes, I write just before I post..well almost always.
    And thanks for the kind comments

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  8. A Plain ObserverOctober 12, 2010 at 7:00 PM

    beautiful poem!

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  9. P.N. SubramanianOctober 22, 2010 at 6:53 AM

    Beautiful and heart filling.

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  10. budh.aaahOctober 31, 2010 at 10:36 AM

    Just_because_today,
    thank you so much for your kind words

    P.N. Subramanian,
    Hey I am pleasantly surprised that you liked it..

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